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如何讓雅思寫作簡潔漂亮？

2015-02-15 10:51 | 編輯：川外外語培訓(xùn)中心　　來自：未知　

導(dǎo)讀：雅思寫作練習(xí)時(shí)，許多考生認(rèn)為長難句能夠提昇文章的語言質(zhì)量并因而取得更高的分?jǐn)?shù)。但是有時(shí)一味地尋求語句的長度反而會(huì)犧牲語句的可讀性與句法準(zhǔn)確性。下面咱們就來看一些比如，領(lǐng)會(huì)一些寫得并不成功的長句和怎么修正的主張：好方法一：防止空泛的單詞和

雅思寫作練習(xí)時(shí)，許多考生認(rèn)為長難句能夠提昇文章的語言質(zhì)量并因而取得更高的分?jǐn)?shù)。但是有時(shí)一味地尋求語句的長度反而會(huì)犧牲語句的“可讀性”與“句法準(zhǔn)確性”。

下面咱們就來看一些比如，領(lǐng)會(huì)一些寫得并不成功的長句和怎么修正的主張：

好方法一：防止空泛的單詞和詞組

1.一些空泛的單詞或詞組底子不能為語句帶來任何有關(guān)的或重要的信息，徹底能夠被刪掉。

比如：When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion。

這句話當(dāng)中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都顯得剩余。徹底能夠去掉。改為：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。

2.有些空泛和繁瑣的表達(dá)方式能夠進(jìn)行更換

例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。

“due to the fact that”即是一個(gè)很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的比如，能夠更換，簡化為下面的表達(dá)方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now。

好方法二：防止重復(fù)

1.盡量防止重復(fù)運(yùn)用相同的詞匯。或者有的時(shí)分盡管詞匯沒有重復(fù)，但意思卻有重復(fù)。這時(shí)分能夠做一些簡化的作業(yè)。

例如下面這個(gè)比如：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size。

large對(duì)一個(gè)farm來說即是size方面的large，所以in size能夠去掉，改為：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large。

更簡練的表達(dá)方式為：

My grandfather grew up on a large farm。

2.有時(shí)一個(gè)詞組能夠用一個(gè)更簡略的單詞來更換

例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents&0#39; farm。

這兒的over and over again就能夠改為repeatedly，顯得更為簡練：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents&0#39; farm。

好方法三：挑選最恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z法構(gòu)造

挑選適宜的語法構(gòu)造能夠使語句意思的表達(dá)更為準(zhǔn)確和簡練。盡管語法的多樣性也很重要，但挑選最恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z法構(gòu)造仍然是更為重要的思考要素。以下原則是在思考挑選何種語法構(gòu)造時(shí)能夠參考的原則：

1.一個(gè)語句的主語和謂語動(dòng)詞應(yīng)當(dāng)能夠反映語句中的最重要的意思。

例如：The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm。

從意思上來剖析，上面這句話需求表達(dá)的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”，而在表達(dá)這個(gè)概念時(shí)，原句用的主語是situation，謂語動(dòng)詞是was，不能著重需求表達(dá)的重點(diǎn)概念，能夠改為下面這句話：

My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm。

2.防止頻頻運(yùn)用“there be”構(gòu)造

例如下面的語句：There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather。

能夠改為：

My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day。

更簡練的句式為：

My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily。

3.把從句改為短語或單詞。

例如：Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote。

簡介的表達(dá)方式為：

The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university。

4.僅在需求著重賓語而不是主語的時(shí)分，才運(yùn)用被動(dòng)語態(tài)。

例如：In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family。

本句不行簡練的原因是本句的重心應(yīng)當(dāng)是“繁忙的家庭-my grandfather's family”，而運(yùn)用了被動(dòng)語態(tài)後，彷佛重心變成了cows和hay。下面的表達(dá)方式是自動(dòng)語態(tài)，相對(duì)來說更簡練一些：

In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay。

5.用更為準(zhǔn)確的一個(gè)動(dòng)詞來替代動(dòng)詞短語，

例如：My grandfather didn't have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends。

Stand around doing nothing本來能夠用一個(gè)動(dòng)詞來表達(dá)，即loiter：

My grandfather didn't have time to loiter with his school friends。

6.有時(shí)兩句話的信息經(jīng)過組合徹底能夠用一句話來簡練地表達(dá)

例如：Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree。

兩句話的信息能夠合并為下面這句更為簡練的語句：

Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree。

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