12月13日雅思寫作真題回想：

　　Shops should not be allowed to sell any foods and drinks which are scientifically proved to be harmful for people's health. 商鋪是否應當禁止出售科學上證實是有害健康的食物飲料?

　　點評：健康類話題，新題呈現。

　　主題觀念：商鋪應當制止出售有害健康的食物飲料。

　　思路拓寬：商鋪為何不能出售有害健康的食物：

　　1. 政府的職責所在，由于政府有不行推脫的職責保證公司合法經營和保證公民的健康。想象，假如政府不處分不約束非健康食物，就會鼓舞非健康食物的出售以及推廣。

　　2. 有害消費者的健康，一起，食用有害健康的食物不僅僅有害健康，也或許帶來家人的苦楚，還或許糟蹋公共的醫療資源。

　　3. 有損于商家的諾言，相反，有誠信商家出售健康食物，久遠而言，公司盈余。

　　自創范文賞析：

　　首段：布景介紹 + 爭議焦點 + 寫作意圖

　　One of the noticeable phenomena is that some shops have been selling many heath-threatening foods and drinks out of the purpose of reaping profits illegally, which has long been a problem of great concern and complaint in numerous countries. Under this circumstance, an opinion seems to enjoy great popularity that physically detrimental foods should be banned. I am in support of the above statement and this essay endeavors to exemplify my stand.

　　解析：

　　1. One of the noticeable phenomena is that …… 一個明顯的表象即是……

　　2. out of the purpose of reaping profits illegally 出于不合法牟利的意圖

　　3. …… has long been a problem of great concern and complaint in numerous countries. 在許多國家，……變成人們重視和訴苦的疑問

　　4. This essay endeavors to exemplify my opinion. 這篇文章將努力證實我的態度

　　二段：首次支撐作家態度

　　My first convincing reason can be easily explored. The government, as a decision-maker, is the representative of citizen’s basic interests. In this sense, every governmental policy will inevitably exert a profound influence on its citizens’ well-being index. One of the compelling obligations of the government is to guarantee every food enterprise’s licit business so that the basic interest of its citizens could be ensured. It is conceivable that more sales of health-threatening foods will be encouraged if a nation fails to penalize or restrict those foods containing physically harmful elements.

　　解析：

　　1. …… will inevitably exert a profound influence on 關于……有深遠的影響

　　2. One of the indispensable obligations of the government is to 政府不行推脫的職責之一即是去……

　　3. It is conceivable that 能夠想象

　　4. a nation fails to penalize or restrict 一個國家未能處分和約束

　　三段：第2次支撐作家態度

　　Another argument I could like to turn to justify my stand is that too much intake of unwholesome some foods will, by all means, undermine one’s health. Specifically, many foods or drinks contain excessive food additives or toxic chemicals，which might contribute to some health-related problems. Chronic disease is a good case in point. Even worse, the unexpected illnesses might bring huge agonies to the family members. Worse of all, free medical care might be unnecessarily wasted if the proportion of unhealthy citizens keeps on soaring.

　　解析：

　　1. too much intake of unwholesome foods 過量食用非健康食物

　　2. contain excessive food additives or toxic chemicals 富含過量的食物添加劑或是有毒的化學成分

　　3. might contribute to some health-related problems 或許會導致許多健康疑問

　　4. is a good case in point ……即是極好的例子

　　5. keeps on soaring 持續上升

　　四段：第三次支撐作家態度：

　　To make the final point，relevant shopping malls，supermarkets or plazas could achieve profitability if they could establish fine sale fame among their buyers，on the contrary, if their food safety problem is reported by local news papers, then, the public will lose their trust in them and the relevant enterprises’ reputation will end up being greatly ruined. Therefore, it is rather groundless to support the proposal of allowing shops to sell unwholesome foods.(75)

　　解析：

　　1. shopping malls，supermarkets or plazas 購物中心，超市或許大型商都

　　2. achieve profitability 完成盈余

　　3. Therefore, it is rather groundless to support the proposal of 因而，支撐……的主張是適當沒有根據的

　　尾段：再次亮明觀念 + 總結理由

　　In a nutshell，I re-affirm my stand that every government ought to be urged to adopt feasible measures to minimize the baneful impacts triggered by the sale of unhealthy foods or drinks. After all, the health of its social citizens indicates fine governmental prestige, harmonious family relationship, improved health index and the everlasting profit-making competence of food industry.

　　解析：

　　1. Every government ought to be urged to adopt feasible measures to minimize the baneful impacts triggered by ……政府應當被催促去采納可行措施以削減由……引起的不良影響

　　2. fine governmental prestige 杰出的政府威信

　　3. harmonious family relationship 調和的家庭關系

　　4. improved health index 提高的健康指數

　　5. the everlasting profit-making competence of food industry 食物工業耐久的盈余才能

　　自創語料庫：

　　1. is harmful to consumers’ health有害消費者的健康

　　2. is detrimental to consumers’ health 有害消費者的健康

　　3. undermine one’s health 有害健康

　　解析：undermine v暗中損壞

　　4. …… is health-threatening ……是要挾健康

　　5. …… exert a detrimental influence on health 關于健康施加了不良影響

　　解析：exert a detrimental influence on = have a really adverse impact on 關于……施加了不良的影響

　　拓寬：have a positive influence on 有活躍的影響

　　拓寬：exert a beneficial influence on 有利好的影響

　　6. ruin the relevant enterprises’ reputation 有損于有關公司的知名度

　　解析：ruin v損壞……

　　拓寬：do harm to the fame of the shops 有害公司的聲譽

　　7. It is impetrative for the government to enact relevant laws to ensure the security of food sale. 政府立法保證食物出售的安滿是勢在必行的。

　　解析：It is imperative for the government to enact relevant laws to ……政府立法做……是勢在必行的

　　8. Many foods contain too much food additives， which might lead to health-related problems 許多富含過量的食物添加劑的食物, 或許帶來許多健康有關疑問。

　　解析：food addictives n食物添加劑

　　拓寬：environment-related problems 和環境保護有關的疑問

　　9. …… impose much pressure on consumers economically v添加消費者的經濟負擔

　　拓寬：impose much pressure on a nation economically 添加了政府的經濟壓力

　　點評：句型能夠用于反駁政府的投資方針

　　10. Relevant shopping malls or plazas could achieve profitability if they establish fine sale fame among the buyers. 假如公司能夠在消費者中樹立杰出的出售諾言，公司是能夠完成盈余的。

　　11. Therefore, it is rather superficial and groundless to support the proposal of allowing shops to sell unwholesome foods. 答應商家去出售有害健康的食物是適當淺薄的和沒有根據的。

　　12. The health of family members indicates our harmonious and happy family relationship 家人的健康意味著調和美好的家庭關系。

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