Some people think that "vertical City" is the best, where people live and work in tall buildings. Others think that "horizontal" City is better, where there are few tall buildings. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 有人以為筆直城市是最佳的挑選，大家可以日子作業在高層修建，有人以為水平城市是非常好的挑選，由于沒有太多高層修建，評論兩種觀念，給出你的定見。

　　自創范文賞析：

　　首段：布景介紹 + 爭議焦點 + 作家態度

　　Such is human to settle down in one’s favorite city. The construction style of diverse cities might satisfy different tastes of people. Perhaps no issue has led to such an endless debate as to whether or not residing in a city with tall buildings outshines living in the counterpart with small houses. This essay aims to prove that compared with the life in small buildings, to live and work in larger skyscrapers enjoys more visible merits

　　解析：

　　1. outshine v勝過

　　2. counterpart n 相對于的人或許物

　　3. perhaps no issue has led to such an endless debate as to whether or not …… 或許沒有什么像是不是……相同引起大家的爭議

　　4. reside in sp = live in sp = dwell in sp v寓居于某地

　　5. enjoys more visible merits v ……的優勢明顯

　　二段：正方觀念的打開

　　As an advocate of living in vertical city, my justifications are not far to seek. The most obvious advantage of living and working in tall buildings is that people’s health can be better ensured. In other words，residents or workers could, to some extent, stay away from the agonies brought about by city noise or air contamination. Another merit coming from undertaking a job or inhabiting in vertical city is that people might have a merry mood. By that I mean, the employees can feast their eyes on the city landscape from those tall buildings when they need to have a relaxation. Meanwhile, residents can enjoy plenty of sunshine if they live in lofty constructions. To make the final point, as far as the city development is concerned, tall buildings will have a major part to play in reducing the pressure of housing shortage and meeting the requirement of population explosion. After all, those small buildings never fail to occupy the precious and limited land resources

　　解析：

　　1. stay away from the agonies brought about by …… v遠離由……帶來的煩惱

　　2. live in lofty constructions v寓居于高層修建

　　3. In other words = by that I mean v換言之

　　4. never fail to occupy the precious and limited land resources v一向占用寶貴的有限的土地資源

　　5. feast their eyes on the city landscape v縱情賞識城市的風光

　　三段：反方觀念：

　　Some people, however, might take a skeptical attitude towards my stand. Some people might argue that horizontal city is a superior option for both city’s future and individual well-being. Another argument might be supported by some people is that tall buildings are not universally suitable for all cities, especially for those underdeveloped towns because tall buildings fail to synchronize with the proportion of population and the financial budget of the local government. Still, I have to concede that small constructions are never without their merits. As for the old, living in skyscrapers might create real inconvenience for them. At the same time, working in high buildings sometimes makes it hard to escape if some uncertainties， for example， earthquake or fire occurs.

　　解析：

　　1. take a skeptical attitude towards my stand v對于我的態度持有置疑的定見

　　2. is a superior option v是非常好的挑選

　　3. are not universally suitable for v不是遍及合適……

　　4. fail to synchronize with the proportion of population and the financial budget of local government v未能和城市人口比例以及地方政府的財政預算保持一致

　　5. might create real inconvenience for v給……形成真實的不便

　　6. some uncertainties n一些不確定的工作

　　尾段：

　　My stand is that developing vertical city is a better choice for a city’s development in the long term. If people are asked to make a choice, I believe the vast majority of them will have a liking for working and living in tall constructions.

　　解析：

　　1. buildings = constructions n修建物;修建

　　2. have a liking for = have a preference for v喜愛……

　　3. the vast majority of them n他們中的大多數人

　　創造感言：

　　12月6日雅思寫作為新題呈現，思路拓寬略有難度。本題寫作和維護陳舊修建無關(盡管猜測熱題中包含是不是應當撤除陳舊修建)，許多網絡“名師”再次宣揚各種壓中標題，暗笑無語。我猜測標題及共享語料庫的原意是協助童鞋全部備考，拓寬思路，提高實力。

　　寫作憑仗的是點滴堆集的腦筋風暴和駕御言語的才能，而非幸運壓華夏題。高分作文的要害無非是思路加言語。精彩表達可使文章在思維不變的情況下異乎尋常，這篇文章寫作對比炫技，刻意使用一些亮點表達，(由于標題的思路拓寬較難)。

　　我為新東方雅思頻道的自創范文寫作現已堅持8個月，這種慣性來之不易，不管新題呈現仍是舊題改寫，極力寫到完滿，在此過程中，精進寫作才調，建立強硬自傲。和人的比賽是簡略的，和時刻的比賽才是最難的。烤鴨之路很艱辛，可是咱們要有堅信，在你圓夢的路上伴你一路前行。

　　Tip：12月雅思寫作最后兩場猜測近期發布，請重視雅思頻道。

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